lost and found/2022 beginnings

The “finding it first” challenge from Laura at dVerse was to create a “found poem” by taking the first line of the first poem from each month of 2022 to create a new poem. No changes other than tenses, no additions other than conjunctions, but enjambment okay and the lines don’t have to be in order. 

Three years of hoping
still she carries spring in her step,
though the bluebells are tardy this year.

The alarm goes off at midnight, mid-winter,
listen to him crowing under the blood moon!
If we make it through December,
then what if I wrap up my truth, and
throw the Christmas tree out the door?

Some nights, sleep rises like static, and
I don’t understand why the humans persist.

 

This came out sounding rather dark, although some of the poems they came from were meant to be funny ones, eg the last line comes from a poem about my pig eating doormats. They also almost all come from responses to dVerse prompts! 🙂 

These are the first lines and where they came from:
January: Throw the Christmas tree out the door from ‘anno dissolvi
February: She carries spring in her step from ‘mum’s hairdressing salon II
March: I don’t understand why the humans persist from ‘high fibre snacks
April: Listen to him crowing from ‘summoning the sun
May: Some nights, sleep rises like static from ‘SNR < 1 & F(net) = 0’
June: What if I wrapped up my truth from ‘a little empty space
July: Mid-winter from ‘woodsmoke
August: The alarm goes off at midnight from ‘looking up
September: three years of hoping from ‘labour of love’
October: The bluebells are tardy this year from ‘bluebells
November: Under the blood moon from ‘under a lilly-pilly moon
December: If we make it through December from ‘If we make it through December

I’ve never written a found poem before, and rarely go back and re-read any of my poems. So this was a really interesting challenge, and I enjoyed it very much.  Thanks Laura!

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24 responses to “lost and found/2022 beginnings

  1. Rob Kistner

    This was fascinating Kate. The second stanza made me chuckle. Well done. 🙂✌🏼

  2. you made a fabulous patchwork poem here – such an enjoyable read. For me the bluebells resonated so well with the next line of midnight blue that the divide was like the silence between chords

  3. This is wonderful. Throwing the Christmas tree out the door sounds like really good advice.

  4. This is really nicely done, Kate! I love the idea of tardy bluebells and carrying spring in your step, even after three years of hoping. The second stanza works particularly well, especially the lines:
    ‘If we make it through December,
    then what if I wrap up my truth, and
    throw the Christmas tree out the door?’

  5. Love this. The ending is so relatable.

  6. I really like how it turned out, Kate. I think the last line fits perfectly with the rest.

  7. I cannot wait for spring season to come.

  8. That closing worked so well together with the rest of the poem… is it really the season or humanity that makes the season hard to bear?

  9. Really???? This is a “found poem”??? I never would have guessed. The flow is amazing! You had me with the first stanza. A wonderful stand-alone poem!!! Really enjoyed this read!

  10. That ending is great, the whole piece is so original and engaging! 👏👏

  11. sanaarizvi

    Stellar closing on this one, Kate! 💘💘💘

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