Under the blood moon
…no, that’s wrong,
that conjures wolves
chasing across snow
hearts racing with fear…
No, not in late spring,
and not here
where the closest thing to a wolf
is the ginger mutt curled at my feet.
So let me start again:
Under the cherry moon,
Earth’s-shadow pinked,
a warm northerly caresses
the swelling berries,
still pale but ready to blush.
No, still not quite right…
Begin again, begin with what is here:
Under the lilly-pilly moon
the ginger-mutt mutters,
paws twitching, ears flicking
at a boobook’s plaintive cry.
Adrift on bloodborne ancestral songlines,
in his dingo dreams he chases the ‘roos,
that thump past
like the slow, heavy heartbeat of the bush.
This was written for the dVerse Razzie prompt, which was to write a poem incorporating the title of a film that has won a Raspberry (worst film) award. It was also prompted by last night’s blood moon, which was red because of the syzygy (alignment) of the sun, Earth and moon. And the botanical name of the Australian native lilly-pilly which grows red or purple berries is syzygium (although I only found that out after writing the poem and googling lilly-pilly to check my spelling).
Oh my GOSH! I LOVE this! I am especially smitten with these words: “and not here
where the closest thing to a wolf
is the ginger mutt curled at my feet.”
….and the “interrupting” with “… no, that’s wrong,” and ‘No, still not quite right…” It flows so well. So glad you posted this to the prompt!
Thanks Lillian ❤
It's the first thing I've written in ages, trying to get back into the habit. 🙂
Enjoyed the conjunction of syzygy and syzygium. Praise be 🙏 to Lord google! and spell check rabbit holes
😀 it was one of those lucky conjunctions.
Avoiding the rabbit holes though. Or trying to.
You might appreciate this spell-check gem, from a lab report I just marked: “air resistance is negligent”.
An enjoyable read. Nicely done poem.
Thank you! 🙂
This was such a treat to read….the process of writing contained within the write. Love the way it progressed.
Thanks Mish 🙂
So lovely, Kate!! I love the false starts and then i love love love love the final stanza!!!
Thanks Worms! ❤
red moon
luna s bane
short sun
is on the wane
🙂
Ah, not here, where the days are still getting longer
reverse course. setting controls for the heart of the Son. niiice.
😀
Love this especially; “Under the cherry moon, Earth’s-shadow pinked, a warm northerly caresses the swelling berries, still pale but ready to blush.”💘💘
Yes! That’s the line I was going to highlight too! This is so delightful, Kate…
❤
David
Thank you both 🙂
I love the local flavor with which you seasoned this wonderful piece Kate. What a great closing: “Adrift on bloodborne ancestral songlines, in his dingo dreams he chases the ‘roos, that thump past like the slow, heavy heartbeat of the bush.” Wow! 🙂✌🏼🕊❤️
Thanks Rob ❤
Kangaroos have a "bounce frequency" of about 60Hz, so they really do sound like a huge slow heart beat going past in the bush. If my little red heeler mutt (which are part dingo) ever catches one he'll be sorry though! 😀
Excellent, particularly that last verse!
Thank you ❤
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