For dVerse Tuesday poetics “after St Valentine left the building“, poems about lost loves, the what ifs, and never could have beens….
I wonder if you remember
that moment when we stopped talking
and (for me)
the sky, the grass, the pavement,
just melted away
(like a corny special effect,
but for real)
and all I saw was your eyes,
for that moment that lasted
just one heart-beat to the next
and forever.
Until, interrupted,
(did I blush?
I know I babbled gormlessly)
the moment was gone.
(I’m lying,
it wasn’t gone –
I wrapped it up carefully,
and tucked it into my pocket
for safe-keeping).
I will never ask,
because…
what if you don’t remember?
Or, worse, you wondered why
I was staring at you.
As long as I don’t ask
I can imagine
that you still have that moment
tucked into your pocket too.
I’m touched
❤ thanks David
I love the uncertainty here. I guess we never really quite know what’s going on in someone else’s mind – or heart. The language is simple, but that central image of keeping a moment tucked away is so lovely. It’s a very approachable poem, balancing the personal and the universa.
Thank you Sarah 🙂
This is beautiful, Kate
Thanks Hobbo!
How quickly things can turn, sadness can grow..this poem is so poignant, and so relevant, written in beautiful style…
Thank you Ain 🙂
Such moments are special and deserve to be treasured, even if they ‘only’ give us poetry…