I
Sun glitters on the ferry’s wake.
Its wash tumbles another cairn,
the clack of the stones
scatters amongst his laughter.
II
“I gave my father a stone,
to hold him here,
to remind him.”
I heard, yet I neglected to do the same.
III
Intricately wound and ornamented shells
shatter among rough glass and smooth stones.
Littoral becomes pocket kipple,
soon-forgotten, scattered and lost.
IV
The sharp edge planes the surface,
raising a glittering curtain, falling
as the stone skips onward.
Collected for the dVerse MTB prompt “picking up some pieces” – gathered partly from an old poem, with some new shards to form a fragment poem.
Elegant verse, Kate.
Thank you 🙂
Very lovely
Thanks Worms!
Ah! Finding the thread in these fragments is amazing, and it hits in that last wonderful line….amazing poetry, and that laughter…wow…..and the stone that is still skipping……superb..
Thank you Ain ❤
I initially had a final line "and I turn away before it sinks", but deleted it because I preferred the lack of finality.
Beautiful, the subject fits the format so well. I had to look up kipple. Clack was the perfect choice of word. 👏
I’d been using the word kipple for years without realising it was a recent coining. But it is such a good word. There ought to be a visual equivalent to “onomatopoeia” – words that sound the way a thing looks. Kipple would be one of them.
Yes it would. It’s a great word. Given me an idea for a poem too. Thanks.
Excellent, I look forward to reading it!
👍
Yo Kate — I am in the half-sleep insomniac bloom of zolpidem, but I like your work. I will return when I am once again razored out to write a ringing comment! ✌🏼❤️
Hey, nice to hear from you Rob. Sorry to hear about the insomnia. 😦
I was just writing a poem about being woken up too early. I hope you get some sleep and a sleep-in.
Brilliant- this poem sparkles with imagery – such memorable lines like:
“Littoral becomes pocket kipple,
soon-forgotten, scattered and lost.”
Thank you Laura! 🙂
Love how you made your fragments connected to a theme… a bit like thirteen ways of looking at a blackbird
Thank you ❤ I'm flattered by the comparison.
You raise a glittering curtain. I so enjoy your writing.
Thank you so much Sean! 🙂