For the dVerse Haibun Monday prompt: Cherry Blossoms.
Every day I drive past a field on the edge of the village. A view of it opens suddenly between rows of tall trees, and I have to look quickly to catch a glimpse of it as I turn onto the bridge into the village. Today this field is darkened by the autumn rains to mud-brown, and even the sheep, knee-deep in mud, are mucky grey-brown.
But in my mind, it is emerald green with fresh spring growth, dotted with white sheep. It is sweet summer deep-gold with ripe grain and pale-gold with dry straw. It is drought-dry hard summer ochre, with willy-willies swirling columns of dust among the thirsty sheep. It is autumn grey. It is glittering white with winter frost. In a single glimpse it is all of these, all at once, each a vivid transparency overlaid on today’s precious glimpse.
I blink, and the field is behind me and I am slowing to enter the village, where the houses and a line of decorative street-trees begins, the last yellowed leaves falling from their bare branches…
I see blossoms foam,
leaf buds forming, un-furling,
on bare black branches.
Beautiful. I love the layers. I love the different kinds of summer. I love the writing.
thank you 🙂
I can’t say I love the dry summers though, this last wet summer was such a relief after the 2019/2020 fire season.
Oh tell me about it. That was a nightmare.
laid down all around
foot falls
covered
last cold day
leads way to tomorrow s comforts perhaps
indeed 🙂 although here in the southern hemisphere
footfalls dull the first frost
glittering under a diamond sky
from chimneys, soon
the first tendrils
of wood-smoke
will rise
under the equator and the gun Kate?
Drinking in the beauty of the scenery by your words. Have a nice week
Much💜love
Thank you very much! Have a lovely week! ❤
How lovely that the field can be transformed by your imagination!
15 years of driving past it almost every day – no imagination needed. 🙂
Beautiful and elegant. Lovely write!
Thank you Frank 🙂
Your poem is grounding in that special tree you look at in just a glimpse each time you pass it. Whatever else changes, it is there, waiting.
It is indeed. One day I’ll stop and climb the fence into it. Although I’m worried I’ll be chased out by the farmer. 😀
I’d be more worried about larger critters with horns. I think that tree is waiting for a hug from you, that’s why it keeps calling out.
I’ve only ever seen sheep in that field, so probably safe 😀
Lovely Kate, really beautiful!
Thanks Rob.
I really enjoyed yours – red buds through to cherries. I wish more street plantings were fruit trees and not just decorative. 🙂
I love how you brought the blossom to life even as a mere memory.
Thanks Bjorn!