June 30, 2020 · 11:01 pm

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elementals I: cockatoo

With a shriek cockatoo2
the sky splinters,
a dawn-white shard falls,
swoops,
sulphur crest rising
like a glimpse of sun.

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Tagged as birds, elementals, rurality

3 responses to “elementals I: cockatoo”

Carolyn Crossley

July 1, 2020 at 11:26 am

Hi Kate, lovely to hear from you. I thought I would reply to you here so you can see how to reply to a post!
When you look at a post in Notifications, you need to scroll through to the bottom of the page. In the right hand corner is a star, if you press on that, it counts as a like. Next to that is a speech bubble, click on that and you can make comments, as I have here.
I hope that helps! Best regards Carolyn Xxx

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- anotherkatewilson
  
  July 1, 2020 at 10:22 pm
  
  Thanks Carolyn, but honestly, there’s no bubble next to the star on the post I wanted to comment on! There’s “share this” with a set of buttons above “like this” with reblog and like, and below the links to “related”. Anyway, never mind, you got my comment. 🙂
  I really like your poetry – you’ve inspired me to try some haiku, so here is a first one to you:
  
  A haiku a day?
  what a wonderful challenge –
  met with such talent.
  
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  - Carolyn Crossley
    
    July 1, 2020 at 11:56 pm
    
    Hi Kate, thanks for the lovely haiku, I really like it. I go on a site on Facebook called THE DAILY HAIKU, you might like to try it.
    
    Best regards
    Carolyn ❤👩‍🦰
    
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